
PART 2: Manuel stood still, staring at the message on his phone screen. The sender had no name, just an unknown number. How could someone know he was checking that seat? Who could be watching him? He swallowed hard as he put the object—a small metal case—into his inside jacket pocket. He looked out the bus windows: the street was empty, just a few lights on in the houses in the distance. Nothing to suggest that someone was watching him… but the message proved otherwise.
That night, at home, Manuel placed the case on the table. He hesitated for a few seconds before opening it; part of him feared that what he found would confirm his suspicions. When he finally opened it, his heart raced. Inside were three folded bills, a small key, and a crumpled piece of paper. On the paper, written in childish handwriting, was a phrase that chilled him to the bone:
“So that he doesn’t get angry.”
Manuel felt a lurch in his stomach. This wasn’t just a forgotten object: it was evidence that the girl was going through something terrible. Money so she “wouldn’t get angry”—who? And the key? Was it to her house? To a drawer? To a room?
He thought about calling the police, but something stopped him. He didn’t have enough information, and a rash move could put Lucía in danger. Besides, that warning message showed that someone didn’t want him involved.
The next morning, Manuel made a decision: he would talk to Lucía. Not directly—he didn’t want to scare her—but in a way that would make her know she could trust him.
When he picked her up, he noticed she was wearing the same sweater as the day before. As soon as she got in, he gave her a gentle smile.
“Good morning, Lucia,” he said in a calm voice.
She barely looked up. Her hands trembled slightly as she clutched her backpack to her chest.
During the journey, Manuel noticed in the rearview mirror that the girl was leaning towards the window as usual. And then he saw it: a bruise on her wrist, barely visible under her sleeve.
His heart sank.
When they arrived at the school, instead of seeing her get out as usual, Manuel took a step closer to the back door and spoke in a low voice.
—Lucía, if you ever need help… anything… I’m here, okay?
The girl stopped, stared at him with wide, fearful eyes. She seemed to want to say something, but couldn’t. Finally, she silently got off the bike.
That same day, after the afternoon ride, Manuel found something new on Lucía’s seat: a drawing. It looked like it had been done in a hurry. It depicted a small house with a window, and inside, a large figure with its arms raised. In front of it, a small, huddled figure.
At the bottom there was a word written in capital letters:
“AID.”
Manuel felt his skin prickle. This was no longer a hunch. It was a silent scream. And he had to act… but how, without putting the girl at risk?
Little did I know that that same night I would receive another message, more disturbing than the previous one:
“Never look under the seat again.”
Manuel didn’t sleep that night. He sat at the kitchen table, Lucía’s drawing in front of him, along with the pencil case, the key, and the crumpled piece of paper. He went over and over what he knew: a little girl who cried every day, an object hidden under her seat, threatening messages, a drawing pleading for help. It was clear that Lucía was going through something serious, but he couldn’t just break into her house or accuse someone without proof.
At six in the morning she made a decision: she would talk to the school counselor. She knew that school professionals were trained to handle cases of abuse and, above all, could intervene without putting the girl in immediate danger.
When he arrived at school, he waited patiently until the guidance counselor, Mrs. Valdivia, came to her office. Manuel explained everything to her in detail, showing her the drawing, the key, and the pencil case. The counselor frowned, concerned.
“This is serious, very serious,” he said. “We can’t ignore it. But we need to be careful. First, I’ll talk to the school’s child protection team. And I need to know something, Manuel: could anyone else know that you discovered this?”
Manuel hesitated.
“I received messages from an unknown number,” she finally said. “Threats, basically.”
She opened her eyes with concern.
—Then someone is watching. We can’t be long.
That same day, the guidance counselor and the principal informed social services and the police. They discreetly began their investigation, without attracting anyone’s attention at the school. Meanwhile, Manuel continued his route as usual, pretending he knew nothing. But his heart raced every time Lucía boarded the bus. The girl, however, seemed a little different. She was still sad, yes, but now she looked at him with a glimmer of hope.
Three days later, the police spoke with Manuel privately. They had identified the owner of the number sending the messages: it belonged to Lucía’s stepfather, a man with a history of domestic violence. The key found in the case matched a small padlock that secured a box in the girl’s house. When the officers entered with a warrant, they found money inside and a notebook where the man had written down “punishments” and “warnings.”
The stepfather was arrested immediately.
Lucía and her mother were taken to a safe house while legal proceedings were initiated. The mother, visibly distraught, confessed that she too was receiving constant threats and didn’t know how to protect her daughter.
The news reached the school as a soft murmur. No one mentioned names, but everyone knew something serious had happened.
Days later, the counselor called Manuel.
—Lucía wants to see you —he told her—. She says she wants to give you something.
When he arrived, the girl approached him timidly. She was no longer wearing the worn sweater; now she had a new, clean one, and her face showed a small gleam of relief. She handed him a drawing: a yellow bus with a smiling driver. And next to it, a word written in a firm hand:
“THANK YOU.”
Manuel felt a lump in his throat. He hadn’t been a hero. He had only listened, observed, and done the right thing. But for Lucía, that had meant everything.
That day he understood something: sometimes, a simple attentive look can change a life.
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